观莲（平平）

[平平]

谢谢叶的奉献老师辛勤编辑，愿碧荷给您带来丝丝凉意。

[流云]

芳心何日放 欲等采莲郎，多有情趣味呀。喜欢这种拟人化的句子。

[平平]

Quote引用流云发表的“芳心何日放 欲等采莲郎，多有情趣味呀。喜欢这种..”谢谢流云老师点评，还请赐教，愿碧荷的芳香，给老师带来丝丝清凉！

[江湖]

好，有情趣。学习了。

[平平]

Quote引用江湖发表的“好，有情趣。学习了。”谢谢老师光临寒舍并点评鼓励！

[平平]

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